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RMC: Toxicity

Doko

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RMC: Toxicity
« on: March 27, 2015, 02:57:17 pm »
Description:



Amount of players: 2/4 small.
Name of participants: Doko, Pyccna.
Original game: Quake Live. [http://www.quakelive.com]
Original map: Toxicity
Original Author: Alexander Mader.
Theme: industrial/radioactive facilities/futuristic.
Game Mode(s): Duel
License: CC BY-NC 4.0

Progress:

29/03 - 3/04: First week








[Layout made by doko, textures and details by pyccna.]


« Last Edit: April 04, 2015, 06:34:53 pm by Doko »

Doko

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Re: RMC: Toxicity
« Reply #1 on: April 04, 2015, 06:40:33 pm »
Map progress:

-Layout finished.
-Details and textures 50%-40% done.
-Some background 50% done.
-lights 60% done.

And some other minor things.


KI113R

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Re: RMC: Toxicity
« Reply #2 on: April 05, 2015, 04:37:30 am »
I see who I need to be worried about ;) looking good!

Doko

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Re: RMC: Toxicity
« Reply #3 on: April 24, 2015, 06:20:45 pm »
Progress: 24/04

-Added 3 Pyccna's models: Animated tentacles, mrfixit floating and mutated mr fixit.
-Background.
-Textures and details changes.
-Some new lights.
-80% of the map completed.








I see who I need to be worried about ;) looking good!

Thanks!  :)
 

Doko

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Re: RMC: Toxicity
« Reply #4 on: May 03, 2015, 10:05:37 pm »
Toxicity is finally finished.
Should i upload it?  ;D

Suicizer

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Re: RMC: Toxicity
« Reply #5 on: May 04, 2015, 07:29:31 am »
Can't hurt to receive some early feedback.


KI113R

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Re: RMC: Toxicity
« Reply #7 on: May 22, 2015, 05:33:04 pm »
SOOOOOOOOOOOO good! I love it.

Suicizer

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Re: RMC: Toxicity
« Reply #8 on: June 11, 2015, 08:16:08 am »
It's a nice attempt towards a remake of Toxicity.
The flow feels good; running trough the map is an easy job and hopping to higher ground is like it's original delightful.
The lots of details that can be found throughout the map is appealing as well.
There are some things which perhaps could be better; like the amount of ammo feels too low.
The mixture of a lot of different textures doesn't feel right to me. They fit their geometry well, just the combination feels odd.
The lighting is a combination of a lot of different lights, which make them not really work together, but rather against each other.
The models are a very nice addition, but there doesn't seem a reason why the skin of the head of mrfixit should be integrated into the skin of the body (just assign it as a different group and call it up from the original model to maintain it's quality).
There are still some texture mistakes which could be fixed; like at the top of scrolling wall at the YA for example.

I would rate this map as average so far, so 5/10.
« Last Edit: June 22, 2015, 12:49:09 am by Suicizer »

KI113R

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Re: RMC: Toxicity
« Reply #9 on: June 16, 2015, 02:11:32 pm »
I typed up an essay. Login timed out for whatever reason. Basically, I see no reason to change anything. 10/10. You deserve it. Kudos for finishing on time especially with the added models.

Fatality

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Re: RMC: Toxicity
« Reply #10 on: June 21, 2015, 10:27:54 pm »
This is one of my favorite maps here, purely because of how interesting it is. The layout is really nice, but I guess I can't judge the map on that since the layout was done by whoever made the original map. There are a few flow issues, mostly with jumps that look like they should be possible, but are either impossible or just really hard. The lighting is also pretty ugly in my opinion, it is way too present in most places and there are not enough shadows for contrast. There are a few places where the shadows are nice, and that should be repeated throughout the map. It also seems way too disco-y and technicolor to me, but it is not horrible, it is actually pretty interesting, just not my taste. I don't really know much about textures, but it seems like all the textures in this map are pretty low-quality. Maybe it is just my eyes. The models of course are amazing and I expect nothing less from Pyccna in that matter. They definitely add a certain quality to the map. I guess I sort of have mixed feelings for this one. On one hand the texturing and lighting just don't look professional to me, but on the other hand it looks very unique and interesting. And uniqueness is the most important part in a map.

I will vote 7.5/10
Edit: As I missed some of the rules of voting, I am changing my vote to a 9/10
« Last Edit: July 05, 2015, 11:50:08 pm by Fatality »

Kv

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Re: RMC: Toxicity
« Reply #11 on: June 27, 2015, 07:08:40 pm »
Only thing I don't like about this map is that color-wise it is a mess, it has pretty much all the colors of a rainbow. The green-yellow-orange-red colors of the map don't really fit together in my opinion.
The map has some great detailing and texturing. It also has the feeling that it is a part of a greater environment, a big facility in this case. There aren't many maps which achieve this so well. It has good atmosphere and best of all, it was completely finished on time!
:)
9/10

Doko

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Re: RMC: Toxicity
« Reply #12 on: June 28, 2015, 04:49:49 am »
I will change soon the lights of this map. Thanks for the advices  ;D